Saturday, 10 July 2010

Saturday Centus week 10........................

Ok the rules have been changed and just as I got used to  being minimalist. This week we can use upto 200 words plus the prompt making 213 this time.

I would urge you to pop in to visit Jenny she will do a great job of explaining the rules plus have loads of great entried to read.

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I stood waiting for the sales person ( her badge said Tiffany quite appropriate really) to gift wrap my purchase I began day dreaming. I was on a beach in Mauritius , the cool breeze of the evening was refreshing I had the most wonderful cocktail in my hand Rum, coconut water and a dash of lime with an umbrella and was waiting for my darling husband to return with Rebecca from the crèche, it was our anniversary and we had decided to spend it alone. And then I saw him from the corner of my eye, he must have been 6ft 6in at least ,dark hair and carrying a bottle of Phoenix beer and those eyes they were stunning I am sure I was drooling .How could there be two people so identical in the world then I heard my name being called “Sarah Sarah wake up When I turned around I was startled to meet a green eyed gaze..." It was John my darling husband “ come on darling the car is waiting to take us on holiday our flight leaves for Mauritius in 3 hours Rebecca is in her seat just then Tiffany returned with my bracelet Oh sorry it took longer than I thought .I am in love.

12 comments:

Sue said...

Nice job! Interesting take on the prompt.

=)

Terra said...

oh the daydream...that was a great idea!!!

jfb57 said...

Aw a home one! Love it!

Tina said...

Nice idea. I think I need some rum... ;-)

5thsister said...

my kind of day dream!

mbkatc230 said...

I really like your use of the daydream for this. And it sounds like a wonderful daydream at that! Kat

Vicki said...

dreaming on....

Viki said...

So good. I loved you were daydreaming. Great job.

Tgoette said...

Very creative direction you took this! We had some great dreamers this week!

Tina said...

oh to daydream ... makes me wonder if dream girl will turn up on the holiday.

Happy SC :)

Tina from
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My name is PJ. said...

This was very sweet, Tracy!

cj Schlottman said...

Another dreamer with an unusual twist for this prompt!